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Post by jonnycorrigan on Sept 9, 2008 16:38:23 GMT -5
I've become aware that REW adheres to certain guidelines when it comes to the formats of the roleplays. For my first RP, I sort of disregarded that, but I am very proud of what I wrote. If my alternative writing style here means zero in terms of competition, I just want you to know that I am okay with that, and accept whatever happens in the results.
If anyone has any issues with this, please PM me. Thank you.
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Post by Blake Worship on Sept 9, 2008 17:24:01 GMT -5
In my personal opinion, I saw no problem with your post. Your character is new and therefore it is very suiting that you would have some background information regarding your character in the form of a post. Here it would be called a gimmick. Something good ringers usually have, so you're on the right track. In the RP (roleplay) world, all matter of things can happen in the span of one post, encompassing many time frames, sometimes even incorporating the use of flashbacks, etc. The only thing you could have possibly made clearer was just how exactly Scotty Raven and REW tied in necessarily with you, serving as your escape from your old life. Most average young males wouldn't just have Scotty's personal number AND the clout to just leave a message and end up in a match. See what I mean? Something that could easily be RPed away in your next post...
Otherwise, I thought it was really good. You'll fit in nicely, sir.
;-)
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Post by "Scarecrow" Jason Myst on Sept 9, 2008 18:30:56 GMT -5
I agree with Blake 100% he is right..You are a damn good RPer, on account I have read alot of different posts in my day. I thought that post was excellent, hell it even had me on pins and needles how exciting lol. So keep up the good work man, I won't be surprised if you climb something serious up in the efedding world or in the RPing world for that matter.
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Post by T Money on Sept 9, 2008 21:59:36 GMT -5
Credit wear it is dew very nice post man.
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Post by jonnycorrigan on Sept 9, 2008 22:54:34 GMT -5
Wow. Very contrary to the reaction I was expecting. Thank you guys very much, I'm glad you liked it.
And yes, Blake, you're right, I will have to make sure to clarify that.
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Post by Blake Worship on Sept 9, 2008 23:00:26 GMT -5
Take it in stride, Jonny. You earned the recognition.
And my respect of your posting. Personally I was waiting for you to post so I could see the writer in action, and I was not disappointed.
I'm probably one of the few here who is more into the writing than actual wrestling, especially in their spare time, so that's what I look for.
Anyway, just glad to be of help...
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