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Post by "Gold Starr" C. A. Slater on Aug 20, 2011 19:47:26 GMT -5
Hey every one can i get some feed back on my posts please. would like to know what you all think, you know the pro's and Con's kind of thing thanks in advance.
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Trash
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Post by Trash on Aug 21, 2011 18:15:16 GMT -5
Hey every one can i get some feed back on my posts please. would like to know what you all think, you know the pro's and Con's kind of thing thanks in advance. I thought you are doing a very good job in getting your character across. One can really get a feel for what you're trying to do here and its not another vanilla generic star, but someone with a specific character that's both easy to follow and at the same time, fun to read. Keep it up. |
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Post by johnmwhite on Aug 22, 2011 8:42:12 GMT -5
I agree with Trash, you are doing a very good job so far of defining your character and letting us know who you are and what you are about. A lot of people like to introduce their character as either a total badass who just beats up everyone or a deeply mysterious entity who just beats up everyone. You're giving yourself much rounder edges and you can see it paying off since you can see it providing opportunities for people to interact with you and post off you.
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