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Post by Tommy Sirius on Aug 18, 2011 17:59:09 GMT -5
...hey man, your character could turn into a really good gimmick..just don't go down the road that some others have. What is your characters purprose not just to "HURT PEOPLE" but why is he vengeance? What happened to him to drive him into seeking vengance. Is he a hero-esque...villian or anti-hero type character?
Put some thought behind it, your character has ALOT of potiential to be awesome stuff to read.
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Post by The Messenjah on Aug 18, 2011 18:37:05 GMT -5
I second that!
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Post by vengeance on Aug 19, 2011 8:51:04 GMT -5
thx for the compliments guys. i made my font bigger because phoenix said she has a hard time to see it. is this better? i dont lik it when letters are really big it looks bad on my machine.
i have a question. i posted but i am not gonna reveal in one post why my character is who he is ur just gonna have to keep reading! but my question is, is it okay that i used other ppl in my post without asking? cause in ever other fed ive been in before i had to ask permission but i didnt see it in the policies here so i went ahead and did it before the chance to do what i wanted to do got lost.
thanks
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Post by The Outlaw on Aug 19, 2011 10:48:21 GMT -5
The answer is yes! It is encouraged so long as you sell the characters you use. Being new to a fed can make it hard to know how that character is so that's why we have the introduction/bio page to help other ringers sell characters and you can also look in the post history to read some old rps to get a feel for it. Here in rew the better you sell the better your graded. As always if you ever need help just ask on the ooc board or feel free to send pms.
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Post by johnmwhite on Aug 19, 2011 17:24:58 GMT -5
Your original font looked fine to me, but the larger size isn't bad either. It's good to get involved and bring other people's characters into it, so long as you portray them respectfully, and you've done a good job so far.
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