Serious feedback

[Tommy Sirius]

I'm acually digging my first roleplay of the match, what are everyone's honest oppinions on it?

Also, the only way to grow as a roleplayer is to hed advice. If you all wouldn't mind, reply here with the feed backs of my roleplays through the match please

[The Outlaw]

Very Good, to my own personal taste such as constanly reading mispelled words and lack of punctuation leadingtorunonscentencesorp a r agraphs is to see who's talking defined which you actually did a good job with.

Back and forth talking without a name added confuses me...

Also, I like the font, a touch of color is always nice =)