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[The Outlaw]

Allright dude...I give you credit for knowing the right match to interject yourself in to make some good heat, 'cause god knows I'll give it to you and I'm sure the other boys will as well.

Now what you did wrong is a little hard to judge, but quite frankly you should have been a bit more patient.

Our match hadn't even started yet and from your post it seemed as if we were already in the middle of it....you took too much away from what was happening to make it all about you....I understand it's your post and you're wanting to be the main character....but you put yourself in our match and didn't give us the respect of giving us an offical start or even picking the ball up where I left it to start running.

Your beginning was sketchy and rough....like I said on the chat board I didn't even know if I was reading the correct thread.

Lastly, with the way things were written, you shouldn't have interjected yourself just because you wanted to....there were already a lot of things built up for any of the 3 pre-mentioned men to take off from....K.C. with beginning the match, Jayson with the picture I had....or me to tie up loose ends or extend the inner stroy as well as write the match. I understand your need and want to be a part of it....but I find it disrespectful....and the one thing I've learned in this game in my ten plus years is it's not about the titles you've won or whom you've beat....it's about the respect you earn from those who play around you.

Work on selling crucial things....even if you have to spend most of your post writeing it out before you can get to the part about you....and sell everything to reality....Jayson Ray was Mr. REW in my opinion once upon a time....I dount he's going to go out with a chair shot from a fan....I'm one of the most hardcore men to play the game and not even I would write it that way.

Any questions...feedback....choice words, feel free to leave 'em here!

[twitch]

Thank you for a more detailed response.

Basically, this is my characters introduction. So therefore, I have to go for impact. I tied in posts from not only yourself and KC but also DK's match before that. I have not touched either of the characters competing in the match. In fact, I left it in such a position that either of you could deal with my character in whatever way you see fit.
But also the whole chair thing. It's to get over his anger and nervous issues. It's to sell the fact that he has this rage where he doesnt know what he is doing.
I will accept your point on possibly waiting and being mopre patient. But unfortunately I think you are both victims of being too productive because your match seemed to be the only one that would get to match action.
I'm finding it hard to believe that I have done anything wrong. This isnt my first fed. And I spent atleast an hour talking over with a member of staff who would be best to feud with and I checked the post with him also. Not to say that I dont know what I'm doing , but I wanted to make sure it was suitable.
But as I say, this post was all about impact, attention, heat, and painting a bit of a picture of my char. It's not going to be a template for future posts. If you understand me?

[twitch]

Ok, just read your post. Do you not think you're acting like a spoilt child? There are thousands of ways you could have responded with options of including my character or not. Fuck, the best RP'ers out there would have had Scotty walking out and make it a three way. But no you just beat the guy down and go for a beer with the guy you apparently wanted to kill 2 seconds ago?
That is the behaviour of a spoiled child. I was expecting more from you. So I pissed you off? Good! Now you might put some effort in.

[The Outlaw]

Pissed me off? It takes more than that....like I said earlier in this thread that you did as well, you wanted heat....you wanted attention....I gave it to you.

The key point from your post was that when you were in a rage you were a savage....but you ended your post not in a rage, but lost in the middle of the ring....and not just any ring, the once that held a man who loves to fight and raise hell, and could give a damn less about your person.

Call me spolied, I find it funny, but ask around....I sold my character! I honestly could give less of a damn wiether or not I win....it was never important to me in the first place. I wanted to test the waters with K.C. James, and though you accomplished your goal you fucked up mine, so like most matches I quit putting any effort into it and let what happend come off the tip of my tounge.

I'm not a nice guy with morals, never have been....I'm a cocky egotistical selfish asshole who's in this buisness for me and me alone....you calling me spoiled is only sugar coating what I would describe myself.

Lastly, based on James' comments....I could tell he felt the match as ruined.....I agree with 'ya kid, there were a thousand different ways it could have played out, and I guaren-damn-tee you I could tell you a thousand more than you could think of, but I'm going to leave you with this....You're acting like a hipocrit. You're mad at the fact I didn't make the post all about your future, and by that I mean someone coming out and making the match a 3 way or whatever else....instead I sold myself and didn't bother to give you the time of day....I made the post about what Aaron Holiday wanted to do rather than how poor Twitch was going to benifit from interupting my match. Well heres news for 'ya, I dont let anybody jump on my coat tails....

You in your post sold your character to the same sort of degree....

So pot meet kettle.

[twitch]

You've got the wrong end of the stick Aaron. That was merely a suggestion of a more creative outcome. Rather than 'beat the guy down and get a beer'. I have not spoiled this match for anyone. You have spoiled it for yourself in your reaction. But hey, if that's the way you want to play it. If that's the attitude you choose to have. Carry on. I'll carry on doing my thing. And we'll see what happens. I prefer to work WITH people on storylines, but if you insist on working against people, as if your nonchalaunt attitude is something to be proud of. Then so be it.

[The Outlaw]

Son....it's my attitude that built empires, it's my attitude that fuels story lines...it's my attitude that has my name on the tip of everyones tounge....it's my attitude that drives my sucess.....

Don't take anything too personal....it's all in the name of the game.

[Cloud Strife]

Twitch, a little piece of advice. Drop it, because Aaron won't. I know the man probably better than most here if not all, he won't bend to your side of it. Not knocking the man, but that's just the way he is. In his mind the match was ruined, one because you didn't post more than once.

Small suggestion on my part, if you want something like that to have more impact, do the deed then leave, or do the deed and then stick around. If you, for instance, had posted again having your char get up, then maybe it would have been a better affect.

Secondly, and this is only my opinion on how Aaron is feeling, he probably feels the match was ruined because he may have wanted to build a feud with KC and that is now tainted because someone got in the way. Rarely have I seen something start off that way and go well. Because if a feud starts with someone outside of it interfering, then others will follow suit, because if it isn't handled exactly right, everyone else thinks that the people involved don't care if others get in the way.

I'm not trying to knock you man, I don't know what you have done elsewhere, and I don't know, yet, how good you are. I am just trying to give you a little perspective, and give you a warning that, Aaron won't let it go.